Feedback & grade of proposal

Grade - B3

Tutors feedback of proposal:

After receiving my grade back for the proposal I feel as though I need to really push myself to ensure a 2:1 at graduation. I also need to begin testing and developing my ideas as soon as possible so that my designs will be as successful as possible. I don not want to add any sound to the images as I think this will be distracting to the viewer.  

After reading my feedback i have noticed that my project will be great to aim and theatre companies as it will show case my practical hair skills with elements of my makeup skills. This will be great for theatre companies to see as I think that it will hopefully lead to paid work once the exhibition has been published.